Tuesday, February 22, 2011

The Seed


One day from out of the sky dropped one seed right in the middle of the chafer and scarab beetles boundary. So no one could claim the seed was theirs. So then the two kings decided, " we would have to have war then." So the two tribes prepared for war for 3 years straight. But what they did not realise was when they were preparing for war, the seed grew into a cherry tree and spread over both tribes lands. So from then on, both tribes lived happily ever after and shared the cherry tree which grew right on their boundary. The End.

5 comments:

  1. Hi Gabriel

    WOW! that is a great picture that you drew maybe you could teach me?
    Anyway what would happen if the seed didn't grow?

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  3. Hi Gabriel!
    My name is Tiffany Fey and I am a student at the University of South Alabama. I am majoring in Elementary Education and I am taking a class this semester called EDM 310, or Education in Media. One of my assignments is to comment on one of your blog posts. I really enjoyed reading your blog post, Gabriel, it is a great story and I love that it had a happy ending, I was hoping it would! You are a very good writer and you should definitely continue writing stories and sharing them on your blog. I also noticed in your "About Me" that you want to be a builder to give shelter to old people one day. I think that is such a nice thing to do and it is very selfless, so don't lose sight of that goal! I enjoyed reading your blog and I hope you continue to post great writing like this story. If you would like to see my blog you can click Here. Keep up the good work!
    Sincerely,
    Tiffany Fey

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  4. Hey Gabriel,
    What a great picture I wish I was as good as that
    Marvin

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  5. Hi Tiffany Fey,

    Thank you for posting a comment on my blog post. I really appreciate it. So thank you from the comment.

    Gabriel.

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