Ready, Steady Aim!

In writing for today we had to write 3 sentences about a picture set for us. Here are my 5 sentences about this archer man.
1: “Just pull it back and let go” the archer thought to himself as he had his eyes set on the target. “I can do this”.
2: As he lined up his target, he bull back the arrow and he................
3: Having his eyes on his prize, he pulled back the arrow and he lined up his target.
4: Pulling his arrow back he wouldn’t take his eye off the target.
5: As focused as he can be, he pulled the arrow back then BAM!