Writing Task Week 8

Today in literacy with Mrs Lagitupu, we had to find a question about our school topic which was Point England School Investigates. I was in a group with my friend Raenan, and our question we chose was, What Are Carbohydrates and Why Do We Need It? Carbohydrates is energy from bread, rice and pasta.  We need Carbohydrates to give us energy and to get us through the day. Those are what Carbohydrates are and why we need them.

Karakia D.L.O

This is my Digital Learning Object (D.L.O) about our school karakia. Enjoy.

Week 5 SSW

CRASH!!!! As the thunder crashes in the sky, the rain splashes on my umbrella. Fighting to keep it up I push it against the wind. My umbrella snapped without warning. To make it worse, my friend drives past into a puddles which soaks me. “Haha shame” he yells out to me.

Now this is the paragraph I have made better:

CRASH!!!! As the thunder crashes in the sky, the torrential downfall splashes on my umbrella. Fighting to keep it up I push it against the brick like force. BANG! My umbrella snapped without warning. To add insult to injury, my friend drives past into a puddles which soaks me. “Haha shame” he yells out to me. In pitter and disper, I walk home cold and soaked.